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Old 03-10-06, 04:52 PM   #21
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yo you kinda owned him a lil ... all you gotta do is re words your shit and you'll be alot better...


i see ehlla potiential and shit in you.... so just keep practicing and you'll prolly be hella dope.......

slimmm... you need to actually use metaphores and learn how to write better BARS... not lines but BARS>... like make your first line have to do with your second line.........but once you figyure that shit out you will prolly be dope...
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