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Old 03-10-06, 06:21 PM   #2
Paranoid
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Yea this would be radio worthy, I don't see why not. You have talent man, you aint wack or anything it's not like wow this kid is so horrible. People will actually listen to it so yea.

Well for the track, I thought you did good. Your flow was pretty good and your lyrics were pretty good through out the song. The delivery and emotion was contructed very well. your adlibs were straight gay and that was basically the only downer on the song. If you just woulda let Wes sing and not have these gay adlibs it woulda been better. And as well J Wes did a good job, nice singing voice for a guy.

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