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Old 03-11-06, 11:18 AM   #8
J. Luth
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My words attack we dont want to hear ya or your whack criteria...
The only way you'd be sick is if I entered your body like bacteria...
nah, too basic....... 2/10
No one is fearin' ya, unless they have a phobia of clowns...
Lady's styles like Ronalds...
Only W she will see is if she turn her uniform upsidedown...
not bad, good concept... 5/10 [/b]
I will put out your flame, this crazy lady's just on fire...
Someone should let her know it is time for her to retire...
no, again, no punch, too basic. 2/10
Im not a liar, everything I say about this bitch is true...
When your tryin' to drop raps you really aint got a clue...
nope, again way to basic. no punch at all.. 2/10
You just put stupid words together and claim you can write...
She thought that a Rap Verse was just the name of this site...
it's ok, not bad...... four/10

not really hard hitting man. you've done better. shit was too basic, no hard hitting shit at all. no quotables from this verse. overall: 15/50 (thirty%)

this nigga from Canada… he must be a rare member
'cause ONLY urban gang-fights result in G-Killahz
ok, nice concept........ four/10
the votes against ya country, when I target you'll die
'cause your verses hit.......when it's under Red Bull's-eye
haha, not bad...... four/10
so don't deny shit, your avy warned you not to drop first
look what happened to tha bitch that took a shot at ya verse
good concept, playing off avy, but avy shit kinda played really still ok: four/10
You benchwarmer, fuck ya Crew, the NBA won’t respect it
This bitch take TOO many shots…..to keep getting Rejected
haha, not bad. Liked it kinda..... could of been harder 5/10
Fuck ya autograph shit, talent from you is hard to find
But I applaud ya sig…nature but even that’s from Rey Designs
hahahaha....good personal...... 7/10

overall, decent verse. you've done wayyyyyyyyyyyy better, but this was enough to solidify the match. closer prolly only quotable in this match. overall: 2/50

V/Fiya
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