yo, i like this shit....rarely people make tracks that are on focus, other then mixtape type tracks....the hook is good....i dont really have any complaints abuot your song...except the mixing...the volume levels might be a little off....but i mean we all have problems with mixing....
for the volume levels, the adlibs seemed a lil high to me, i dunno....but yea good beat, hook, creativity...i mean you could up ya delievery...but its still real nice.....i like your style....its pretty raw, without straight out sayin "ima gangsta, ill kill you" not many people on here have the ability....good shit...keep it up

thanks for the feed btw

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