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Old 03-12-06, 09:47 AM   #13
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Voted For: Axe Affect

Nothing too outstanding from either parties.....worser than my battles ha...but newazy.. here is feed...

Tmoney:

this line could have been left out ur post

I’m tired of your insolence now I’m gonna expose your impotence/

that shyt, didn't rhyme with shyt, so what was the necessary there?....


and God forbid, if you use YOU one more time or any form of you...i will electrionically bitch slap you...lol....

just elevate son, ull be on ur way..
Dude, u left me hangin...


Axe Affect:

u had a couple of good multi's in this verse....althought, the opener, had too damn many it aint even sound right, that thew me the hell off...

i dont get most of ur lines such as:
This kid is just a joke, and ill smoke him just like a weed bag.
(what does joke have to do with smokin like weed bag?)

These connected punches gonna freeze him like a game of freeze-tag
(made me laugh....so it was decent..)

I punctured these words into your belly and covered your shamed-decapated head as if u was in the taliban

(what the hell, fix ur damn grammar...)

Vote:Axe.
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