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Old 03-12-06, 02:33 PM   #9
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damn thats a dope ass beat im lovin the beat

Joe Stacks verse: punchlines are ok lol at "treat him like a turtle and put his face in a shell" the flow is ight overall u just need ta work on ur punchlines a lil more but not bad

UNF: wassup yo i just left feed for u not that long ago ur punchlines are a lil better than the other one but not perfect the flows dope once again u pulled that off fantastically..ur qualitys a lil worse than joe's but i dont really care about quality as long as it aint terrible enough where i cant understand what ur saying

other than that this was a decent song keep shining ya'll its ur boy prozak leavin proper feed u know how i do
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