This was fucking wack !!!

The chorus was bland and shitty, not to mention that the last bar didn't even fucking rhyme. Ya know, I don't know about you... but where I come from survive and sacrifice DO NOT rhyme.

The verses were total bullshit, half the crap didn't rhyme but then I don't have time to quote all of the non-rhyming bars. The idea for this piece was wack because it is just the same old shit that has been done a million times before....come with some fucking originality why don't you. The rhyming was basic as hell throughout... well when shit actually rhymed. Overall, this piece was bullshit and not even worth this feedback.

But... considering I have written it all, I'll leave it.
And fuck you if you don't like criticism.

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