E-Style, Bitch.
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Voted For: TaShay
man i had to turn my back on her verse, cuz i was reading it and her shit couldn't get worse
i'm the gift and the curse, so u should fuck with me.
if not u can suck my D......I........C
K's is what i spray all day
yo shit is outta date, i'll knock ya head off ya shoulders and send it in a milk crate
fuck wit me, shorty u must be crazy baby
my rhymes is on crack, and ur shit is lazy baby
u ain't know, u fuckin wit a 80's baby, i'm hot and i ain't saw u on the board lately, don't cry
cuz u ain't gonna see not tear in my eyes
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Ya whole set up was weak....
punch game is non existant, and you didnt use one dope personal. you got alot of work to do, yo...
Your LyRiCs are all~a~game even if ya verse was set~a~flame, U Still coudln't HeAt~~TaShay..//
ConFront ya ass with hard~hitting~FiSt, u only slapping me like uz really~a~BitCh, throw LoW 'blows' till u get ovar~ian~cyst..//*Tumor in the Ovary*
U got Nothin~to~Throw, Like bad~hoax, I laugh because yall whole verse is simply~a~joke..//
U JuSt Givin braggin~RiGhtz, like FaKe VirGinz, U only ACtin~TiGht, I Won This BaTtle, BYE~BYE....
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I aint feelin your structure, seperatin bars like that...looks ugly to me...
you had some aight rhymes tho, wordplay is far better than this deala dude lol
just need to land that final punch of the bar a little better and your good to go
vote-shay.
rtf on my battl wit Antic, yo.
y'all stay up too...Peace.
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