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Old 03-12-06, 10:51 PM   #10
TaShay
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From: Chicago-U Already Know
This was feedback posted for ~Ace~

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Since da limit is 500 imma just drop feed..


Young Blaze...ya StruCture was Horrible....I don't know what the hell was what... at the beginning ur shyt aint rhyme...so from my point of view ya shyt was horrible...Ya Personals suCked... and ya Closer...was just stupid....up ya game, do some cyphers, then step back on the front lines, right now u need to be training..

Ace:

ur shyt, was simple as hell...but it was better than blaze, chop ur shyt up, create multis, and you'll be decent... this right here

"I'll have dis dude silent after dis like i took his mouth"

creative, but boring...lame...

but overall ya verse, had more structure, and rhythm,

keep it up

GooD LUcK..
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