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Old 03-12-06, 11:16 PM   #20
TaShay
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Voted For: FIVESTAR GENERAL

MiC MaCs u should hand over your rapping writes

1. u got merked.
2. ya Verse was just stupid..

For Instance:

"You spell so bad, had me thinkin yo alias is tornados second account"

^^ What the FuCk...that shyt is too ConFuSing...i still dont FUcKIN GET IT..

" N makes no sense, like you talkin to whites in ebonics "


^^ wHAT THE HELL was that supposed to rhyme with?

I cant even comment further on ya verse, and people call me wack..Oh my GoSh!!!

u just crammed wordz to make them rhyme, and ya whole verse aint flow for Shyt...
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Five Star:

ya verse definitely topped dudes, at some cases ur shyt aint rhyme too....and u got off flow...meaning, u aint finish ur lines...

I dont like ur structure..ha

but you getz my vote, and dude omg....*walks ouT*
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