Flyweight
From: Chicago-U Already Know |
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IP:
Voted For: FIVESTAR GENERAL
MiC MaCs u should hand over your rapping writes
1. u got merked.
2. ya Verse was just stupid..
For Instance:
"You spell so bad, had me thinkin yo alias is tornados second account"
^^ What the FuCk...that shyt is too ConFuSing...i still dont FUcKIN GET IT..
" N makes no sense, like you talkin to whites in ebonics "
^^ wHAT THE HELL was that supposed to rhyme with?
I cant even comment further on ya verse, and people call me wack..Oh my GoSh!!!
u just crammed wordz to make them rhyme, and ya whole verse aint flow for Shyt...
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Five Star:
ya verse definitely topped dudes, at some cases ur shyt aint rhyme too....and u got off flow...meaning, u aint finish ur lines...
I dont like ur structure..ha
but you getz my vote, and dude omg....*walks ouT*
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