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Old 03-14-06, 08:14 AM   #29
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From: decatur ga
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Voted For: Carmelo

The chance of melo hurtin me is like a daylight burglary
Its minimal u learn from me with scriptures causin surgery
dis line wuld of been good in a freestyle


can’t compare me to you, no debate, god damn bitch elevate
you far from great, carmelo only poetical when he masterbate
waznot feelin dis

five thousand posts, no life and still you learning the basics
this fake kid neva get the picture, so I grab a pen and trace it
dat wuz ight

face it you excavate in life, as a personality you not distinct
not good with words but ur record indicates ur hot with links
boring

carmelo? Yeh but Anthony can reply when the orders tall
whereas you can’t ‘hit’ anything, you must have swollen balls
gud name play





prems the type to cause hype and immitate Vets Style.
Next he'll be ''knittin yarn'' for a better Text-style (textile)
gud opener

Not that your a biter, I'm sure deep down theres a Fighter..
But Your Mind must be like ''Dim Authors''..
..................................I think you need a Brighter writer.
dat wuz ok

Ignite your pen with a lighter, Shit call on the Brigade!!...
Or you could resort to plan B...
...........................And tell everyone you have aids
Atleast nobody gon fuck wit ya, hold your head up high
Cause if I was you & I started rhymin
.........................................even i'd be askin...WHY?
i liked dis closer dat woz nyce


oonly da closer and opener seperated da 2 verses so carmelo getz mah vote