your shits all over the place and hard to read. maybe if you explain some things it'll make a bit more since but your flow a bit off. Your lines are way too stretched out and why would you freestyle about nothing when your in a battle homie. that shit dont make sence, there a place for that in this battle nigga.

over all ...4/10

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figure I could drop by and promote my my first mixtape and what not since im here..