Well basicly I wasn't feeling this very much. You showed that you know atleast how to rhyme. And this is what i saw in this OM.

1.No certain concept
2.Throwing words in just to make it rhyme.
3.The lines didnt connect with eachother.
4. Didnt feel that there was much put into this.

So basicly just keep on dropping and elevate. Because you need alot of work and im not saying that to be disrespectful. Just keep elevating and put more into your rhymes.

RTF on my OM thats linked in my sig.


P.S. Please dont use numbers to talk

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Project List

The Classick Mixtape Vol (8/18)
Age Of Consent Mixtape Vol 1(16/16)
The Classick Album(2/16)
S&S Express E.P.(1/10)

Lot of back to back shit. Stay tuned.