Typing as I listen...ok u shouldn't have come in wit hook immediately, let 10 secs roll off then bring hook in, an on top of that...whatever u was saying over opening hook was blurring out the hook...so I couldn't make out anything til the first verse came in...ok verse 1...its opens wit good flow but the energy isn't there....u got a kinda lackluster delivery on this....hook had good energy then verse comes in an its a drastic dropoff...I had to focus to listen to first verse cuz the lack of energy made it boring...second verse same flow as first, decent but once again lack of energy....lyrically ya punchlines was bleh....u didn't say anything that had any "OHHH!!!" factor an the concepts was played to hell..petroluim, prison breaks, an u cant be serious wit the "see so many stars you think in u space & rappers below me like ya leave u in basement, not on my level thats why ya waiting on the elevator?" dawg, I never heard u do like a lyrical showcase type track so lyrically I was expecting ill wordplay, creative flips...if anything..I thought ya metas would be overly tedious but they was painfully simple...similies all the way...I was looking for more, especially being ya mixtape exclusive...all in all it wasn't horrid, it was decent...u got the technicals of making a good song down but missed all the intangables. Emotion killed you, if you had a more engaging delivery I woulda overlooked the other flaws somewhat because the overall vibe woulda been tight...cuz ya flow was koo, held a good rhythm, but it was jus that delivery...the lack of energy in the verses an even somewhat in the hook(which was brought up mostly jus from the dubbing) really takes away anyway replay value this song coulda had...cuz allthough ya punches was simple an very played...the average joe would be impressed if they were accompanied by a good delivery. It sounds like u recorded this in 1 or 2 takes..like ya vocals aint warm up an u aint really get in that zone that produces a great take...so overall not bad...but if u releasing this to the public, u need to step it up!....no hate at all son, jus good, honest feedback...keep coming back wit more tracks son........1

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