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Old 03-16-06, 09:38 AM   #28
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wtf @ this battle!!!!!!!!

no hate whatsoever but both you dudes are terrible... i can see that the two of you just started rhyming about 43 seconds ago.... lol...

but for real... a lot of mother goose antics went on in this one... lots of sentences didn't make sense... no originality from either contender.... no punches..... no wordplay... i was bored with both pieces....

omma give this one to IDM for the simple fact that his rhyme was more complex and made more sense.... not but much, at all!!!!! .... but he edged this one out by the skin of his teeth....

you both need to work on set-up, punches, originality, wordplay, and everything in between

keep writing and stay up
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