Thread: kriminal vs Oz.
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Old 03-16-06, 09:50 AM   #34
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Voted For: Oz.

gotta go with oz on this.....

krim... none of ya lines connected.... ya ideas were all over the lace.... real sloppy man.... for realz.... punches not hitting.... it's like you sacrificed skill just to make it rhyme... where's da originality?.... the wordplay?...and what the f*ck does Krims Known For Strattlin Dudez mean? .... looks a lil suspect to me.....tryna tell us sumn?...lmao

Oz...don't get excited... you had better ATTEMPTS at punches but i was bored with ya verse also.... nothing stood out except the fact that you write better than the other dude... the mase line was horrible...so was the mike jones line.... yes i got it....but it did nothing for me.... the setup was all wrong.....the "hit bout as hard as a beat" was the worst line you dropped..... honestly, you both can use some elevation but that's just me... either you want real feedback or some cookie cutter bullshyt.... i'm just laying it out there like i see it....

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