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Old 03-16-06, 12:39 PM   #23
Payn
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Voted For: TaShay

vinceness_deala

Felt ur verse wuz pretty weak. Ur flow wuz nothin special. Had sum played shit. Like..if not u can succ my d-i-c shit is basically played out nowadays. Sum lines were pretty dumb. Like tha man i'ma turn my bacc u used as an opener. I see it wasn't a good wordplay especially wit tha gift & curse right afta it...but it didn't work much. Diz Line 'i'll knock ya head off ya shoulders and send it in a milk crate' was prolly tha only decent line..but even that wuz worded poorly.

Tayshay

Ok...ya flow, was way betta den deala's. Ur opener didn't rhyme 2. Sum of ur lines just seemed stupid 2 me. Only decent verses were 2, & 4..wit tha throwin low blows & fake virgins, actin tight shit. Mainly cuz dey were tha only 1s to make some sense.

So..I got to give it Tayshay.

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oh yea rtf in my battle http://www.community.rapverse.com/s...ad.php?t=224402
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