listenin...

...this is kind of an original feel, which is good....i can tell that already that this beat is gonna get annoying, lol...vocals is a little hard to hear...tiem for the positive...good flow...lyrics are decent...im likin your delivery tho....you got a nice concept in mind, htis song is good but i feel like it could be great if it was on a different beat...overal, notta bad track tho...keep it up man

rtf plz
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