You Need Knack for This
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Voted For: twenty9
29:
you need to up your shit. you had some ok conceptz, but you fucked it up with your wording. the bald line could have been a lot better. work on making effective punchez.
jc:
you almost had this, but ya punchez didnt hit hard enough. when i saw the starz i figured there was a personal, instead you were just explainin some eazy and simple punch. work on makin good personalz.
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