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Old 03-18-06, 09:40 AM   #1
Nick Knack
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antic:
ya punchez were pretty weak, but they were punchez. work on ya wordplay cuz the kind you have right now is pretty forced. just keep writin.

carm:
most of your shit was self glorification. only one or two punchez that really hit effectively. work on makin sure you make punchez and not self glorification shit.

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