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Voted For: *Antic*
antic:
ya punchez were pretty weak, but they were punchez. work on ya wordplay cuz the kind you have right now is pretty forced. just keep writin.
carm:
most of your shit was self glorification. only one or two punchez that really hit effectively. work on makin sure you make punchez and not self glorification shit.
v- antic
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