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Old 03-18-06, 06:20 PM   #5
Bonafide
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This was alright. But nothing really pulled me into it. Ur vocab was nice but for ur flow the lines seemed kinda stretch, so u may wanna work on that. Everything else was cool, just continue to do what u do and u'll get better. Please rtf on anything in my sig. Thanks and Peace.
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