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Voted For: John.Hendricks
without question deapest flows has this...........he had punches....personals....wordply........granted, i didn't feel any of them connected very well accept for the wordplay on his name was okay......overall...i would give your verse a 6/10........and rexless...because of the fact that it just didn't show a whole lot of understanding of battling....i'd give yours about a 3/10....one thing that would help you a lot, is work on punches, flow, and rhyme scheme...rhyme scheme is huge...if you get that down..the rest will sort of come
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