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Old 03-18-06, 09:37 PM   #9
Payn
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Voted For: Rah-Ta-Tat-Tat

lol diz was actual an 1-sided battle... I liked it... anthony didn't bring ne heat in ya verse... but rah's whole verse had personals thru-out... too heavy handed direct punches... made me nod my head while reading; & actual brough a smile 2 my face... good shit... Now as for Anthony's verse... tha opening line doesn't rhyme... sleep wit u, & eat wit u i guess it rhymes no matter how I say em... *shruggs* so I'm really not feeling dat ant... & I know anthony's structure is a lil different from others... but his bars were really off in this 1... syllable 4 syllable tha shit's just off... But there were a few witty 1 liners in there dat made me chuckle & question ya sexuality

Punches: Rah (he just had more)
Personals: RAh
Creativity: RAh
Complexity: Rah
Structure: Rah
Enjoyment: Rah

Vote: Rah ... anthony u didn't have one personal & ya verse couldn't been directed at any1...

rtf in my battle: http://www.community.rapverse.com/s...ad.php?t=224402
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