Hook's not bad. Maybe a couple add libs in the background or something might spice it up a little. First verse not bad. Dude had some pretty good flow. Content wasn't bad either. Eastcoast comes in a little low, but the flow is nice. Slips up a little, but pretty good overall. You need to speak up a little too. I can tell that you might not be used to spitting this fast or something cause you sound uncomfortable. Third verse I wasn't feeling that much. Flow was kinda.......meh. You definitely could have taken your time on this verse. You got some pretty good potential, but you need to work on your presence a little. Spit into the mic like you own the shit. What I do is I tend to get mad at the mic and even have, like, an angry face when I spit.....it helps me get into the right delivery. You should have been coming in more hype and you sounded monotone. You also need to work on your syllable count a little. I don't actually count them, but I like saying the lines over and over again and seeing what I need to fix. Sometimes you can just change a word or two......

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