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The Alien Toung
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hook is tight shit man....u DEFF got a voice for this man....catchy shit.....i cant complain bout none of it...well...u jus said ant you so...leme get to you lol
voice is nice man..flow is a bit rushed...like off beat a bit...write to the track a bit more...then take a lil time w it..u rap like ur running outa time on ur 1st verse..i usta do the same thing...
3rd verse seems like ur more comfortable LOL @ elavating on the same song...u did well in verse 3 sept like the last 3 bars u rushed again...ur delevery is nice and emotion is their..lyrics kinda simple but this is a club track so thats iight n shit...idk what else to say,this is a nice piece man
stay up
1nE
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Originally Posted by Apathy
"when i rap they say im radical...but if rappin dont do it...ima clap u in the clavicle to classical music"
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Originally Posted by Chris Stylez
Im not as much of a pimp as Ebircs.....man if you still with O.Y.D. You should branch off into O.H.D. into the porn business. With Owning Her daily. Ebircs....Biggest pimp on RV.
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