still gotta work on pronunciation some unf...although it is getting better...i liked your flow on this...lyrically it was pretty nice...work on mixing some...making your vocals warmer...

rev is def getting better....flow has gotten tons better since last time i listened...u need to cop a new setup man..i think your to the point where u should do that..u do need to polish the flow a lil more though...its not perfection yet...but i admit...its WAY better than what it used to be...presence is also pretty nice....not bad man...

overall this track had potential..its nothing i would download and put on a cd or nothing...but you both are def. getting better with time....only thing i can tell u both is to keep recording and keep recording..cause thats really the only way to get better...good job on the track fellas...keep working

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