iite rtf'ing....

...iite, 1st-damn yur voice is fukkin raw (sounds nuthin liek yur pic, lmao), good flow, delivery and emotion level is good, last line cut off a lil fast tho...2nd- anuther dope voice, good flow emotion and delivery jsut liek 1st verse, also ended quickly, to me...3rd-beat is changin up i c...good voice but flow is off in a few spots, improve deliver and emotion bruh...only thing i got negative bout this track is that the chorus shood stand otu more or sumthin cuz it wuz kinda hard to tell that that was teh chorus (but i got lo-fi so maybe thats why) and the talkin started gettin annoying in between the voices lol...but yea this was fiya, altho the lyrics could be uipped tremendously, i feel wut your goin for shit is nice mayne keep it up...