This was pretty nice man. Nice flow and strong content, didn't really feel to heartfelt, largely in part to the lack of a real defined storyline. But you had some very brilliant lines, this in in particular was my favorite:

'a tear sheds for every predicate dressed in weaponry..'

Man, that was just insane to me, I loved that alot. Ya, everything was pretty on point, the lack of storyline just kind of dissapointed me. But this wasn't really one of "thoooose" pieces so, for what it was it was pretty flawless man. Gald to see you back and writing again.