this was dope..to be completely honest....before....(i havn't read your shit since we were beefin about CS) your shit was cool, but a lot of it was just big words that made sense, but they wern't the most relevant...or best words to fit, or describe the emotion you were trying to convey...it was better than a lot of the shit on here...but i just couldn't ever feel drawn in, because the forced vocab took away from what you were really trying to say.................Now, it's completely different, the words fit perfectly, and they are extremely relevant....this piece is genius right here for a few reasons....1...the imagery is amazing...thats all i can really say about that....2....at first it seems more poetic...which it sort of is..but a rhyme scheme does come out, and it's interesting to see that, i don't know if that was accident or not...but it worked....3....it has a great twist, and ties in with the imagery...you almost say..."how did i not know" the end makes the imagery 10 times brighter.......besides my own..(not gonna say who's i like more) this is probably the best piece i've ever read on rapverse....and if theres something i'm forgetting, it's def the piece i've read in a long ti,e....very well done

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