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Old 03-23-06, 02:52 AM   #24
M&rk
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This was feedback posted for Drakel

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everyone hates your rhymes, seriously, i swear bro
you see more birds flying, than quality scarecrows
i know OMB isn't patient, his shit makes a tough obstacle
he has so many DR.s, he could start up his own hospital
vs.
Drake, ya late.. I own rap, you in this game's a waste..
i'd bite ya lines if I wanna know how an anus tastes
but im not gay im straight... straight dope, straight flow, straight lyrically,
Although sometimes im vague, like your topical imagery

T- your shit was so corny i was lookin for a cob in your verse, but u had two good bars but the anus one eventhough it was decent and original it was corny with the whole anus thing. the other vague line was str8
D- i think your first line u used before, but good agian. and your other one i guess i haven't heard the dr thing that way but it was pretty simple, the rest of your lines i thought were not good, but i liked that sherlock holmes set up was clever
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