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Old 03-23-06, 10:24 AM   #14
Payn
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Voted For: EyeDentdy

ok...this was hard to vote cuz u both were kinda off. I dont really like any of your verses. Eyedenty. you started out ok. ur second line didn't rhyme wit ya 1st and your flow could use some work. both of you need to work on punches and personal but I'll vote for eyedenty because he made attempts at it as to were Nucentz didn't really try his opponent. honestly if Nucentz could write his verse better and turn his lines into more battle ready rhymes...he could be a good battler later on. V/ eyedenty
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