Lol ya man, my shit before I left for Rb was unhoned and amatuerish. It really helped when I started writing more and more poetry and writing with all the guys from Po' non stop. And ya, the rhyme scheme is meant to switch up and twist all over the place throughout, that's part of the style I've been using for the past 2 or 3 pieces I've done... It's meant to flow no matter what word lands on the beat, and the use of punctuation rather than making the ending of a line the most important alows the content to flow better and really engage the reader rather than a stop and go type piece. Thanks alot for the love man.