hmmm i think that i heard u flow this concept in a yahoo cyph one time w/ oyd n shit. yea ive heard this concept alot so im not givin u no points on originality, that blackalicious alphabet arobics is tha illest tho... lol back to tha point, this track.... flow is aight, i dunno if this was tha best beat for it, seems like ur tryin to fit ur bars in real fast. def would sound better without all tha adlibs, or just turn them down, cuz it sounds fresh wen theres no adlibs, but then wen they come in it half annoys me. shit is aight tho.. it just seems like ur sayin a bunch of words tho instead of tryin to m ake a story or sence ya know. but that mite b tha point, its pretty tite at that jokker part lol... yea its def pickin up, the l's were nyce... m's aight.... kinda fall a lil to me at the end of the m's and into tha n's damn this shit is long lol watchu do like 6 bars for each letter? sumtimes ur rime scheme reminds me of rugged man lol but trust thats a compliment. w/ sum work this shit could b tite... y u stop at t tho? u couldnt think past that.. seems like u just gave up at the end man.. i dunno this was aight to me, nothin really wowed me tho. but with sum tweaking it could b real nice just drop those adlibs or fix em or sumn

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