wow q....less then expected...you sound like you tried to put too many words in a ya verse....sounds rushed....not what im used to hearin from you....the hook is catchy...no problems with it....second verse is a lil better with teh flow....they lyrics seem to be alright....nothing stands out, but like i said for him nothing sucked....i mean id say you won cuz his wasnt really taht well put together...but i expect more from you...and you know you didnt come hard with this one....you can do better

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