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Old 03-24-06, 01:13 AM   #2
Jay Rose
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hmmm...after the diss track ill sit back n give some good honest feed....

ha love this beat....the beine song stays on my playlists....okay
its still the lisp thing...it takes a lil bit away from the delivery, but adds to the emotion....
you kept the lyrics deep on the track....i like that...nothing bad...i respect the q line...it shows you dont hold a grudge thats honerable....few people can do that.....the girl sounds nice, but i hear the noise redux or an echo too much....sounds very robotic....but shes a good singer...overall...good track...better then some of the stuff ive heard from you....your showing progress....i have no complaints bout the lyrics...pretty good song...work on the girls part with the echoey sound...n yep...keep it up man...
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dad said, son you're fucking high
and i thought, yeah there's a first for everything
so i took my old man's advice
three sad semesters
it was only fifteen grand spent in bed
i thought about the army
i dropped out and joined a band instead


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