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Old 03-24-06, 08:43 PM   #5
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Listening through some Audio Technica ATH M40 fs's

You should sould adress either your mic or the echo where you're at cuz it's got some MEAN buzz to it. The beat's cool, I could def see better flips of that sample. The first verse was pretty cool, I'd expect some heavy punches and braggodcio on the first verse, sorta liek what you brought on the second verse which bounced more on the flow and kept it alive. The third verse sounded like a combo from the first two, from the "no nikkuuhh" to the flow.

The only thing other than the vocal qual I'd change is to rhyme that last bar on the verse with the sample "I can do anything better than you" so it transitioned into it and not seemed like it came outta nowhere. More braggo woulnd't have hurt either in my opinion, would really pushed the track over the edge for me peronsally. peace
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