View Single Post
Old 03-25-06, 01:15 AM   #14
Paper View
Motivation=Money
 
Paper View's Avatar
 
Posts: 313
IP:

Vocab didnt impress me to much Larry you gotta stop starting your lines with "CAUSE" it looks bad

Dollar had some nice lines coo structure I was feeling your part the most. The flow was off at some points but it might be just me rappin it wrong in my head nice droop though I'd like to hear the audio. RTF link in sig
__________________



DRAINED EMOTIONS


MY CONFESSION

^PEEP AND I'LL RTF^

Quote:
Originally Posted by Young Dolla
*tears up* You bastard you unlocked some of my deepest feelings with this OM. But on the real thats real. I was really feeling this OM cuz i can relate to it.

^^^My OM is that dope^^^
  Reply With Quote