turn your vocals up 2-3dB's or put a lil more energy in the vocals. Listening to the whole song, the lyrics work, but you have to work on forcing all the sylables in one line together because it makes your flow sound rushed. Like for exmple on the hook you say "welcome to st louis" is crunched together so you can get all the sylables in, but you should take out that ONE syl that's pushing everything together and put in something else, like.."welcome to the lou" (as an example) which would put things right back on time.

I know it's not your spittin ability, because you have skill, but your writtens are making it seem rushed on a song that otherwise would have been pretty damn good in my opinion. Right now it's about "ehh, good". Just my opinion.

Peace


PS, What time is 13 in the morning?

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