listening through audio technica ATH M40fs's

Beat is uber slow. Lay some slllliiiggghhhhtt reverb on your vocals so the blend int othe beat a little more. The hooks nice, but the lyrics, I guess I'll have to hear the end of the story to say wether they worked or not. The first verse built up pretty nicely. The hook is ill. The flow is on point.

Story ended pretty well and at one point consistent to the story. I like the come bakc into the h o m e fade out on the hook. Pretty ill track cept for the abrasive vocals imo.


oh yeah, can you RTF here by editing your old feedback :http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=225008

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