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this was pretty ill...
the part i didn't understand...is you said...
"when you perrish..the illuminati is dead"
and that's nejla speaking to you correct?
but you're not illuminati..her father is..so if you die...
how is it that the illuminati dies, when her father is luminati...
maybe i read somethin wrong, or ddin't pick up on something...
or maybe thats why you said this didn't make sense...if it does though..
explain it my man
besides all that...it was definately thought provoking..and you can get an idea for the situation..and how someone reacts to some shit like that......a lot of quotables in there too...
if this was a little more clear to me(probably my fault) and was a little more pollished as far as story line(i know you didn't try as far as that)
it might be one of the coolest pieces i've read in a long time
rtf on "I am God" or my diss to paranoid...or both
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