yeah yeah yeah... first time peeping ya joints.... beat was nice.... like how da vocals sounded nice and crisp... even the echo...
1st verse was aiight... like everyone else said it fits da track but i felt ya coulda flipped how ya said some shyt to make it more effective

loving the hook... gunshots are too loud though... turn em down a notch.... almost can't hear the rest of da hook because of it

second verse is much better than the first.. seemed put together a lot better... almost as if you were more conscience of what you were writing... good shyt... if first verse was like that it woulda made for a better track...

overall decent shyt... i ain'y really into that gun talk street shyt but it was aiight

stay up..one

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