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Old 03-26-06, 10:32 PM   #11
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Voted For: Po'etiquette

holy shit now this is sumthin to analize before I Vote:

first of all the structure:
..................................... both structures were tight, nothing original, except 2 bars from Sykill that went strange when I was flowing em

then the flow:
...................... nothing lost, except wut I said before, that 2 bars from Sykill

Wordplay:
................. nope

Vocab:
........... now this one was really matched, but Sykill has a better dictionary since he used a more elvated vocab

Originality (creativity):
................................... I am the sex had this cuz his verse was sumthin neva I hurd before, he used words well, and really captivated me while reading this

Strong lines:
...................."shape appears at the doorway to hell, her tears catch up to the blood
shivering like a hypothermia ravished body,her fears act from above"

so this explains my vote... no hate at all... jus votin
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