Vocals too loud, flow is str8, you puttin too many words in, I can't hear anything youre saying you need to put less words in each line, cos its jus blah blah most of the time, hook is decent, but with ya verses its absolutely blah you need to put less words, the punches I did hear was nice, the only thing good in this is ya delivery, but im goin hard on you cos you need to know..

Flow: Okay but cut words outta lines, so we can hear you better and flow will also improve

Presence: Up the flow and itll come

Delivery: Good

Emotion: Good

Punches: Decent

Voice: Can't hear shit, articulation is ewww n u need to be told n no offence but it seems like most people peepin ya ish is ya d/r not IG but the other dude, you need to get sum real feed so you can work on ure shit, so there you go I would like to here sum improvement or an attempt atleast..peace

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