ILL GRAMMATIX... any other questions?
From: ATL..still reppin' NYC |
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yo.... unf .... ya got ya hands full with this one man....
beat was nice... actually liked ya flow on this... real convincing... lots of conviction and confidence in ya voice....lots of play on the young jew thing... one thing ya need to do is adjust ya levels... ya main vocals are kinda low and ya back up vocals are way too high... aside from that it was a pretty solid diss... lots of breaks in between the verses... more hook woulda been nice instead of the talking... in a way it was still kinda effective... and lay off the "bitch" werd a lil bit... it was overdone... other than that... i enjoyed when you were actually rhyming... easy
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"real recognize real but still others remain jaded
believing bullshit accounts of how "so-and-so" made it
there's a formula for gimmick emcees that are over-rated:
wackness created... payola paid it... and radio overplayed it"
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