honestly I like the middle of the verse the most. I didnt like the 2nd line for an openner. those two(kid,bizkit) is dead. I liked flow of things, u had some decent stuff, I did'nt understand the bridge part though...I guess either your a troll or you str8 out lived in queens befor, Im not sure. it seems like this aint your style of rapping cuz I got the feeling you ran out of material a bit befor the end. but this is just my opinon. check out my audio and holla back at me and let me know wat you think of my favorite song "here that click clack". the link is in my sig.

I give your verse a 4.5/10
nothing personal...

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figure I could drop by and promote my my first mixtape and what not since im here..