more more more emotion on the hook...this like a southern style banger beat you gotta loud on dat hook... let em fuckin know...first verse is cool i like this style this is more of my type of hip hop music than the rest of this site... shits ill.. just work on that hook...and shit will be fire... hit me up on aim for collabo sometime = accomplishmentdv and try to rtf on mafia stylin track...

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