Listenin'...haha Im sorry I dont think you can pull off this beat, this is not ya style attall however youre hook is decent, but you sound like youre running a marathon, I can hear you better, which Is good but you still sound like theres masses of flem comin out ya mouth, youre flow is good but you cant hear you really, a bit better, but ya voice is really eww, you need to spend more time on this, you gotta make sure you open ya mouth which I used to not do but now I've realised so fam take some advice, this was a 5/10 at best...keep at it mayne...you need to take more time...

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