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Old 03-27-06, 05:58 PM   #4
Dabatos
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listening..

liking the beat..

intro is cool...

flow is good, delivery is on point.. flow doesnt stop at all.. thats good.. likin verse so far..

Chorus: chorus is good.. catchy, but not catchy enough, could improve alittle on that..

iight 2nd verse same like 1st verse, but should try to change it alittle, cuz its sorta like u listening to same verse agen.. if u know wut i mean..

lol u extend the beat too long haha.. got me waiting for a 3rd verse.. darn u lol.. 8/10

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=225195

[plz rtf...
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