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Voted For: Axe Affect

this dude aint shit he's like playin cat and mouse/
i'm the exterminator he's the rat in the house/
NAH
I’m tired of your insolence now I’m gonna expose your impotence
WHERE'S THE SECOND BAR
Your rhymes are like your dick too small and never hard/
But don’t worry T-money is sendin you a get well soon card/
NAH
my shits wide spread Axe your shits weak and local/
your chances of winning are bleak cuz T-money is loco/
NAH
man i'm not goin anywhere so let's see what u got/
lets see you rap with your vocal chords tied in a knot/
NOT SUCHA HARD PUNCH
you can't go agaisnt me Axe your bones are to brittle/
you think u can hurt me with weak rhymes, not even a little/
NOT GOOD
your goin against T-money i'm just way to advanced/
anyone who thought Axe could win he never had a chance/
NAH

TRY SOME MORE METAPHORES AND HARDER PUNCHES

I will split ya back, rip ya track, and you beatin me is like Michael Jackson goin back to black, just picture that.
WEAK
Believe these votin cats when I get this KO cuz ill be crackin ya ankles and have you walkin on your kneecaps.
WEAK
This kid is just a joke, and ill smoke him just like a weed bag.
These connected punches gonna freeze him like a game of freeze-tag.
PLAYED AND RATHER WEAK
I-RACKED yo head and I-RAN after your family and I BAGd-your-DAD as if this verse was another terrorist plot man.
DECENT WORDPLAY
I punctured these words into your belly and covered your shamed-decapated head as if u was in the taliban.
WEAK
Stick to your diary writtin instead of producin raps
I dont let ''pussies'' hang considerin im ''nuessin cats.''
DECENT

THE WORD FOR TODAY IS...STRUCTURE, EVEN WHEN RAPPING LIKE YOU WERE YOU CAN SET THINGS IN A BAR BY BAR BASIS THAT'S CLEAR

The multies are what gave you the battle bro. keep workin on your style and t money step up your game bro seriously, no hate just vote