Thread: Kingdom of Sand
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Old 03-28-06, 03:26 PM   #1
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Kingdom of Sand

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Fucked up structure I know but I posted this on a site that didn't worry about structure..

Just an ogre stuck in the sand dunes telling time by a handmade sundial-
It’s the afternoon…
In the king’s name, knight’s shield the towers,
-While constructing castles with mother earth’s terrain,
A monarch lusting for power, digging moats with his finger tips…
There’s a small ridge…Serfs secure the livestock and pull the draw bridge…
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There’s just a surge of walls shaking, the start of a kingdom’s demolishment
Where the Lion Heart is slowly breaking, unity smolders in the masses…
Astonishment forms as lords swarm around broken stain glasses,
Priests gather up their classes and hide away the holy sacraments,
The Courtyard is consumed by cadavers of brave soldiers and battlers…
As their souls are swept away by the brooms of the sea scattered in graves,
Whispering: …The vassals, the protectors of the castle, battered and doomed-
And the tomb’s voices echo in the minds of the lords tied to the feudal system,
The sound of the scepter was sent in reverberations,
Echoing across the throne room in a cold sensation,
And it mocked them with mighty winds whistling in frustration,
With fiefs flooded, and blood glistened under the dark moonlight…
Orphans are soon frightened to listen to the king’s words-
The boom of the ruler’s triton…
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-And riots started to form…
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Once a sanctuary of gods,
But wicked necromancers’ torture and plague the Pantheons…
Smog and broken windows consume it in flames,
Floods of gasoline taint the aura of feelings,
Faces of utopia painted by the era’s artists melt off the ceiling…
Cupid’s poison arrows smite the villagers of the ages,
Stealing and mischief clog the mind state of good in a number of stages…
Castle dwellers have a courtship with tragedy,
--Spitting on lady luck’s corpse!
Yearning for support and a strategy to unite the splitting kingdom,
But the waves keep hitting the fort…
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-Until the society crumbled…

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